This story I’m reading… So much sex. Just… SO MUCH. Like, way too much.
And like, I’m not a prude about sex in stories. I’m not that super into it and I’m mostly a glosser, but I don’t have a problem with people adding it. It’s just that this is a lot of the same stuff OVER AND OVER again. Like, the dude needs to learn some different moves or something 🤷🏻♀️
There comes a point where the amount of sex isn’t just unarousing but boring. A repetitive pounding with his massive member. It’s like, "Doesn’t that hurt at this point???" He’s so big she can barely wrap her hands around him. That means he’s almost as big around as a baby’s head.
The funniest thing was the misspelling that ended up with him pounding his rock into her. Which made me immediately think of the trolls from Discworld, and then it was like "rock and two pebbles?" because I’m a silly.
I’m writing my weird sci-fi dystopia story along with my usual Darkstar fics, but I’ve semi-promised an erotica for my Patreons. And since I’ve been listening to this story…
I’m thinking about giving my character’s love interest average to less-than-average sized genitalia. Like, I’m to the point that thinking about someone with a dick the size of an adult forearm has me wincing and feeling sorry for that man’s poor wife. I mean, she seems to really be into it from the scenes as written, but in real life… she’d have to have her servants sew her a donut pillow because yikes.
I don’t think I’ll ever write a "serious" story with that amount of sex. Like, an erotica, a porn, sure, but nothing where a reader has to skip 60% of the story to get past the sex and back to the plot. I’m having to skip forward dozens of pages to get back to the actual action.
There’s a lot of screaming orgasms and sloppy wet kisses. It’s not even the least bit arousing the way it’s described. Just a lot of yikes resulting in dozens of pregnancies.
I don’t know. It feels like a lot of sex with no sensuality. The physical with no real sense of romance. Just pounding and thrusting and baby after baby after baby…
Because of the title of this post, which started as "reading; writing; arithmetic" and transmorphed into aeromancy… My little erotica story is going to feature an aeromancer. Because why the fuck not?
Which means it will be set in a fantasy world with realistic magic. Aeromancers, pyromancers, geomancers, necromancers, aquamancers, demomancers, spiromancers, etc.
I have kind of a "world background" concept building in my mind palace (lol) so there will be the erotic content amongst a hopefully vivid worldscape.
I usually like a generic background with the characters providing the vividness against the drear, but I’m picturing a lush backdrop for the sensuality of the main characters falling into each other’s spheres and merging together, entwined in a life together. Where physical imperfections aren’t problems but an endearing uniqueness that only enhances and deepens their relationship.
~Harper Kingsley
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Was the story written by a dude?